Beautiful!

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I am me, and nothing can change that.
Unfortunately.

There's always darkness hiding in the light, but there's never light hiding in the darkness.

She has an intriguing look, like she's looking just at You (therefore congrats on the effect! ) Addittional praises for the corset on the kimono it's wierd but kinda original...

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Life is so wonderfull... but that's not my life.

You're getting really good with those Copics. She's beautiful. I really like the colours you chose for her and the shine on her hair is just oh so nice.

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"Du kannst, Du willst und wirst nie vergeben
und Du verteufelst sein ganzes Leben
treibst in den Wahnsinn von
maßlosem Zorn, Vernichtung und Rache,
Du bist zum Hassen gebor'n!"

She's gorgeous, I love the colors!

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Is there any wonder?
Why we came about
Was it for love?
Or to let sin abound
Isn't it a wonder
Awake from blood thick dreams
Remove all the stones from our hearts
We must all believe...

Aww wow, that's really beautiful Aria. You've got her gaze direction spot-on so that she's looking directly at the viewer no matter what angle they are stood at; a trait of a skillful artist. The colours are vivid and gorgeous and this really stands out as an wonderful piece. I'd say it's one of your best 'resentable' pictures, meaning it'd suit well on the front of a portfolio or web site within a small group of your chosen works.


Critique:
(I can clearly see that you've gone for a vivid picture of light, pleasant, pastel colours, so I'm not sure if any of this is applicable).

- The inside of her right sleeve takes up a large part of the viewer's eye-draw time, however, it looks slightly wrong because the shading is the same as the outside. It might look better if this was slightly darker to reflect that it's the inside of her sleeve.
- The half-corset waistband is somewhat blank in reflection to the excellent fold work you've done on the rest of the clothing, this might look better with a few tiny hints of light-grey tension points.
- You've not drawn the outline for the ribbons and seems that overlap. I'm not sure why, probably your style as I see you do similar things in other works with hair over eyes etc., however in this piece, because it's so stand-out and vivid, it might look better if you were to just add the definition and continue the outline across the overlap.
- A little more shading to define the shape of her left breast under the clothing would make her fantastic figure show more but also give that area a stronger draw-eye level. The line you currently have on her clothes also seems that it doesn't quite follow the curve stated by the start of her cleavage.

Hope that helps ^_^

That should be the P of "presentable"

Looks great. Her eyes are stunning.

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Satan for President!
"Why Choose the Lesser of Two Evils?"

The coloring on this is stunning. I especially love the eyes. And the character design is amazing as well

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Some Bunny Loves You!

Daisuki wa Bunny! dot com

the eyes are awesome *__*

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"So much darkness in the world, so much darkness, Francis. No light. Only darkness. And there is always someone who will take it upon himself. Always. Always. Always. I have become evil, but once I, too, was good..."